What detail scripted within a small amount of text. Ken MacGregor efficiently captured the curiosity of Tina, Martin’s pain, and the excruciating dissection in 160 gory words. Bravo!
What Little Boys are Made of
by Ken MacGregor
Tina pushed down hard on the X-acto knife until it went through Martin’s skin with a little pop. Martin whimpered through the gag and tears fell from his eyes. With an exasperated sigh, Tina looked at her friend.
“You brought this on yourself,” Tina said, “so you can just be quiet.”
Leaning forward to add her weight to the blade, Tina dragged her hand down toward Martin’s belt. She stopped at his bellybutton. Setting the bloodied knife aside, Tina pushed her fingers into the wound. She grabbed the edges and pulled them aside, exposing Martin’s organs.
Frowning, Tina poked around inside her friend’s body cavity, pushing aside guts and organs. After a moment, she stopped and flicked the blood off her fingers.
Martin’s eyes were fluttering, fighting to stay open. They fixed on Tina’s as she looked down at him.
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Amanda – thank you so very much. I’m glad you enjoyed my twisted little tale.
Ken
Ken- You are most welcome. I am looking forward to reading more of your work.
Would this be a good time for me to mention that I have a story collection? It’s called An Aberrant Mind and is available through the usual markets (cough – Amazon).
An Aberrant Mind is in my Kindle queue. I will be sure to leave you a review on Amazon as soon as I am done reading. Looks like some some stories will give me nightmare, which I always welcome.
You’re way ahead of me then. I hope you enjoy the book. Again, I appreciate your kind words.
I purchased it right after I read your FF. Let’s just say you had me hooked at first slice.